Question:
Hi there.
Will you please read and rate my writing? It is a fantasy-romance called Back. Themes include lost love and time travel.
http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1486760
It would be really appreciated!
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G.
said
Ok I read your story and it has a very good plot…it is very sweet and romantic. But I think that you have too many details about some things that are not that important, like for example when he was eating breakfast, or watching TV. I liked the fact that the ending was not one of the Hollywood cliches, but rather unique and realistic! Great job I! I would give you a 7.5/10… You could also change the title into something more romantic…or mysterious.
Great job overall!
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cheez-e-momma
said
WOW! That was a great short story. I had a couple of tears. Nice twist at the end. I like the title. Your English isn’t too bad, but will need to be tweeked before publication. I’m sure some publishing tycoon will have plenty to say on the negative side, but don’t listen. I really liked it. If you write more, please post here again. I’d love to read more.
Keep up the good work and don’t get discouraged if at first you don’t succeed.